Breaking Out From the Basement
We kept ourselves here
We kept our names to ourselves
No underground features retrieved
A notion to change
Built up and blown down before it hits
The realisation of the ship sinking
Ceremonies conducted under searchlight
Beams blind our young eyes
War-rooms full of smoke and mirrors
Story from the salesman:
‘People are the same,
‘All straight-backed, straight-edged, cases in hand’
We have sought an ulterior path
Over mountains and canyons
Maps spread flat on bare rock
Over cracks in the ground
Keep to the rock face, stare out to sea
Estuaries converge, mist swims on the ocean
Ships pass, to and fro
Crew oblivious
Mines sunken, satchel charges disposed
I take a Polaroid
All is grey and blurred
The sky translucent, now stranded above
Drifting, islands uncounted, flickering
Disappear and reappear
It is always dark, we return and report
Our findings to the others
The reflections, that return our gaze
In the mirror each day
Are beyond recognition
Behind, the walls dissolve all
No room to manoeuvre
Ian Whiteley
Fri 8th Mar 2013 12:13
I really like this one David - not too sure what it's about - but equally, I don't want to know, because the mysterious phrasing and anonymity of the figures within it are part of its appeal. There's some good imagery at use here, which paints a bleak landscape with desolate and foresaken characters. Great stuff!
Ian