Hi everyone
I just wanted to write a little love story.
not really a poem or rant or anything
just me kinda searching around for feelings
creating little situations
out of the past few weeks
living
I have not titled it
she said she could see it.
I could never feel it
and her compliment
grated
and I embraced it awkward
with a blush of fumbling
a flush face for humbling moments
when I get beaten back
the surprise of a moment
we are not lovers.
my own still heart
hidden
but why.
“If emotion resides, must do, else never cry,
would he?”
She, who like a guardian over him, waits
stance of a mountain cat
potentially pouncing
with visions of rolling hills
in her minds eye
a dream of Oxfordshire
the strut of a Stretford street
or the cartwheel of a Stratford river
walk, Avon, Avalon
wonder, full words, all the places.
unaware, they shared the same
trampled patch of green
the imprint where many lovers made-
and have been.
in all our lives.
and the has been's, who grew old together
counting
still loving in ruby celebration
where is my heart
and why in her hand,
knots entwined
unlocked?
its taking too much time.
hurts, branded by the pinch
of a firebrand past, see.
more in common
the many lovers
by this age
carry damage
yet master the cage for which
any free bird could mourn
the latch is off
it is up to you to slide
out of this
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Comments
<Deleted User>
Sat 31st Jan 2009 15:19
Val: I'm happy you like this one! from Lauretta
Janet: CJ may read it, my voice is a little hoarse this week ;-)
CJ:x
Yes Pete,this is different there is tenderness, I love the last verse your perception of life is quite remarkable.
<Deleted User> (5646)
Thu 29th Jan 2009 22:47
I love this one too.
Any chance of a listening link on this one?
So very different to others of yours and would love to hear it read without the rant.
Janet.x
Love it
Cx
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Francine
Sun 3rd May 2009 20:07
Love this... especially first and last verses.