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Over Edge

Tonight, they say

is the end of the world,

and what a beautiful night

it truly is

with a touch of winter,

a mist of sadness,

and a dark sea

of peace.

Everyone is waiting

for the lights

to go out.

Everyone wonders

what waits

beyond the world.

Tonight is the last night

to be alive,

to be free,

and dream a thousand dreams

before the last one disappears

into the end.

Will we be remembered?

What history will be

left behind,

waiting to be discovered?

And the hours drift by.

I stand alone,

watching the world fade,

and awed by the beauty

of death approaching

over blazing stars

burning so vividly

into darkness.

And it was all nothing

but a dream,

a night to never end,

and we wait.

We wait

for life to begin.


Over Edge

by, Melissa R. Mendelson

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 7th Mar 2009 15:54

blazing stars, burning so vividly, into darkness

Beautiful poem Melissa, I can feel the anticipation in every line, great work, Jeff X

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Tue 3rd Feb 2009 19:31

Hi Melissa,
this reminds of the festival of 'Imbolc.'
I think that was on Tuesday!
The groundhog legendary story. As long as you don't see your own shadow on this day, all changes will be for the better.
Or something like that.

I like this poem too.
Janet.x

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winston plowes

Tue 3rd Feb 2009 16:47

Hi Melisa. This is what happens after too much cheese just before bed time?
It seems we have both been writting about the end of the world (see my recent contribution to erite club - The last moon). Well when it actually comes and no one else has predicted it then we will be able to stand up and say "I told yo....

More seriously - Lovely piece nice mixture of sadness and beauty.

Winston

Helen Thomas

Tue 3rd Feb 2009 15:59

It made me think of those seeds that will only germinate after a forest fire.

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Alison Mary Dunn

Tue 3rd Feb 2009 10:19

Hey Melissa, lovely write. This dream/poem of yours kind of says 'wake up, the world is beautiful, enjoy'. :D x

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