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Very atmospheric. Would you consider scrapping most punctuation and letting the reader coast through your words? I think we would arrange your ideas without being steered. I do know that many winning poems in contests are still much punctuated, like image-heavy prose. Yet, I embrace unharnessing words, giving them freedom to fall into your mind (as you do yourself, although I am nowhere as skillful as you are.) Perhaps you are experimenting -different styles for different poems. Balance is hard, but you are the BOSS.
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Marianne Louise Daniels
Tue 16th Apr 2013 14:03
Thank you Cynthia - for your time and comments. Perhaps I should let go of the punctuation for a while... the pace is important to me but sometimes I do get tangled up! Am hoping to hear you read at Sale tonight so be nice to say hello. x