Waiting For Miss Write
Waiting For Miss Write.
“I like you”, I said,
without the need for thumbs pointing to the sky.
She smiled, a beautiful smile.
Her face unlike a circle with U lips.
We parted on a kiss
that had nothing to do with sex or X.
Promising that we’d talk again
later in the week.
The phone box on the corner
wasn’t mobile - so I was.
I walked there and waited
to trigger the time-synced bell.
I knew how much the call was costing
as I inserted coins.
Oh my God, how we laughed out loud -
without the need for acronyms.
You said you’d write, using pen and ink,
studiously thinking about each word.
The anticipation, as I wondered when
and what you’d have to say.
Old fashioned, maybe,
but every slope of your pen
would etch your beauty deeper
everywhere it touched the paper.
Transfixed for days behind the door
each time a footfall echoed on the drive.
Not eating, sleeping,
thinking of anything but her.
Then, when hope had all but gone,
there was no ping - just a reassuring clatter,
as my letterbox gasped and
the letter dropped on the mat.
<Deleted User> (6315)
Mon 15th Apr 2013 20:25
Oh now then..there is nothing quite like a real letter is there?..Gasping letterbox is such a good line Ian.
A lovely read too (smiley face inserted lol )