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Posthumous

 

 

Love

 with a long howl

 lessening down the night

 

Sad

 as a lost soul

falling a great height

 

Hopelessly

 cried

 

And my

incredulous heart

 hissed  ` murderer! `

.......................

 

And died.

◄ four from the Gazebo menu Epic

A poet at prayer ►

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 2nd May 2013 23:20

Thanks folks for the comments.

Cynthia,...fixed it, thanks. :)

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Tue 30th Apr 2013 14:30

great poem Harry.x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 30th Apr 2013 12:38

Harry, check 'Hopelessly' - just a typo.

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 29th Apr 2013 10:20

Fantastic Harry. Really like the simplicity of this and the way it tells such a complex story full of emotion in so few words. Classic!
Ian

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