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The pain of separation

Because of you

Eternal bliss seemed possible.

Thoughts of you

Helped me get through each day.

 

How can we be apart?

And yet, I wake each morning alone

Imagining you’re with me.

Nobody should feel this way.

Except I do.

Should it be like this?

 

© 2009

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clarissa mckone

Tue 10th Feb 2009 02:15

Hi Andy, The pain of seperation, runs deep for many, and its difficult to get through at times.Your poem is very nice.

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