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The Radio

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I found the last radio

Out amongst the forgotten things;

It’s insides empty

But the smooth mahogany body intact.

 

I carried it home

And kept it beside my bed,

Each night pressing my ear

To it’s cool cavity to hear

The sound of pines trees

Blowing back and forth

And the sloshing of black waves

Carrying me to sleep.

 

Some nights it would howl

Like storm winds through a damp cave,

Other nights I’d wake

To the clatter of it across the floor

And swear i’d see some shape,

Light as a fox,

Slip from it’s shell

Into the shadows of the room.

 

 

◄ As She Lay Dying

Kitchen ►

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Tom Harding

Mon 12th Aug 2013 19:56

thanks all!

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 10th Aug 2013 16:00

This is, for me the best poem I've seen on here for a while. I love everything about it except for the word "sloshing" - for some reason it seems to jar with the rest. It is all lovely imagery though - and the phrase "the last radio" conjours up so much. Perhaps on a very still winter night you might hear the last shipping forcast?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 7th Aug 2013 12:43

Full of mood, well developed with telling diction. It's interesting that it is a 'radio' instead of any old box, however beautifully made. That choice must be deliberate for all kinds of associated ideas; and that the 'sounds' and 'shape' are rural in the sense of open water, pine woods, damp caves and a 'fox'. Also the 'last' radio - as in last - because of what exactly? And who has gutted the electronics inside. It's like a sci-fi movie in a moment.

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Sat 3rd Aug 2013 22:17

really nice piece.xx

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 2nd Aug 2013 22:32

beautiful poem Tom - quite surreal and disturbing - although there are some comforting images in there that sort of turn on their head - good stuff :-)
Ian

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Thu 1st Aug 2013 21:46

An absolutely lovely poem and picture.
Thank you Tom!x

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