AFTER AN EVENING AT THE POET'S CAFÉ
It was Friday night after 10. Only
taxis and buses prowl the Reading Streets.
On my way to the station my steps
tell me that story about a lovesick
Russian Count and the aim of his affection,
Natasha, who would shoot him in the last line
of the poem. I was passing bars and clubs
where bouncers stood like crows in black overcoats
joking about small brutalities
and the power they had over queues
and restricted areas. The young people
thought the weather belonged to another
season. Some stood in huddled groups on the damp
pavement their cigarettes trembling like beaks
of hummingbirds after the nectar of lips.
Turning into Friar Street a tramp emerges
from a doorway, approaches a girl
ahead of me and points at the thread
of material that is her skirt. She walks on
patting her hair, looking at her phone
while the tramp mutters “cunt, fucking cunt”
and fumbles in his pocket.
A boy joins the girl and they draw further
away and they walk away a Russian Count
and his lover Natasha who is pulling out a gun.
winston plowes
Mon 2nd Nov 2009 22:47
Hi Rodney... Thought 'prowl' was a bit predictable. Liked the bouncers and their small brutality kicks and the hummingbird cigarettes. Loved the reference to Natasha, repeated at the end but it seems there is something wrong with the flow and the repetition af away? Taken as a whole it captured the seady sinsiter night and the journey home where you have to occassionally look over your shoulder. Great stuff. Win