Moving On
Breathe in -- aspire
breathe out -- expire
my aspirations knows no expiration.
With each sunset
there be -- sunrise awaits
and therein lies my expiation.
Here in a downy refuge lay,
this germinant resolve:
what I was I no longer am.
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Never allow a label to confine and delimit you. Often, the identifier that people use to describe you does not encompass the sum total of who you are. Outside today's box is your freedom.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 16th Dec 2013 13:14
Good theme - very universal. Always good to see you posting.
IMO, I suggest two changes - for rhythm and verb tense respectively:
With each sunset
sunrise waits'
and
here in downy refuge lies
(unless you are using 'lay' as 'song' which doesn't quite work either.)