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The Importance Of Magic In The Void

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The ironblack eyebrow of Hughes

raises an inch as I arrive

and like a sad A Minor Chord

Kundera sits in his corner

as I walk through this place, the void.

 

I’m offered a whiskey tumbler;

taste my soul in its afterbreath.

Virginia Woolf, the curve of her

intelligent nose running through

her prose, gives a toasts to the void.

 

JD Salinger pours red wine,

so that men, women and Gods can

line their parallel hearts again.

But the gloom continues, persists.

I fear I’ll be lost in the void.

 

I try to forget the fizzing

cortex of regret, of the holes

in our memory that are random

and guilty, of the journey I

have taken to reach here, the void.

 

In this room full of drunk writers

we wait for the magic, that spark

of inspiration, whether from

absinthe or lovers, the devil

or God, we need to leave the void.

 

Then it happens, Herman Hesse,

steering his canoe offers an

escape through the canyon of dreams

and we ride, ride on those rafters

thinking through it all of

the importance of magic in the void.

 

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 7th Apr 2009 22:12

Hi John, sounds like a right session!

I’m offered a whiskey tumbler;
taste my soul in its afterbreath

Love these lines and the others a good job done with a difficult concept - for me anyway!

Cheers see you thursday Jeff

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Tue 17th Mar 2009 17:41

Hi John,
this pretty much sums up how i felt at the last two or three Tudor events really except the last stanza didn't happen for me which is as good a reason as any to stay away until i capture some of the magic for me. :-)

Great poem as usual. Even though i probably gleaned a different meaning to everyone else, but that's poetry for you.

Janet.x

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Val Cook

Tue 17th Mar 2009 15:08

A brilliant piece John."the fizzing cortex of regret " More John, more.

darren thomas

Tue 17th Mar 2009 12:57

John - you know I'm a fan. I want a signed copy of your book with an authentic Guinness stained ring on the inside cover. I'd prefer it too, if it was a pint that you'd purchased.

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winston plowes

Tue 17th Mar 2009 12:18

Hi John... I was tranported, thankyou. Loved Hughes' Iron Black eyebrow and the curve of Woolf's nose. A sureal end to this sureal and satisfyingly dark piece, great stuff. Winston

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