Conceded Reality
Few moments desolate
often get you to think
How the twist of events
push you over the brink
Streaks of fleeting joy
abruptly come to end
Sans even little caution
or time to comprehend
Just split of a moment
it hits one ever so hard
Striking at susceptibility
when entirely off guard
Once past the instance
frenzied turns the mind
Attempts couldn’t avert
what fate had designed
Hard may though seem
but difficult is to believe
A sense of helplessness
and inability to perceive
It reminds of inevitability
to which all are exposed
The pre ordained calamity
if deemed can’t be opposed
Harry O'Neill
Wed 19th Feb 2014 21:41
I liked the spareness of this.
But should `infallibility` be inevitability?
I think also that `tried` hints at deliberation.
Maybe `met`?
With respect.