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UNTITLED 2

Oh my god!! If id have known what awaited me in life, id have stayed in the womb!, but mum pushed me out, and screamed ''son theres no room'', straight from the hospital, into the fire, dad was to drunk to change my nappys, mum was to depressed, short fused and snappy, dad hit the door, we never saw him for dust, mum danced with the devil, exchaned love for lust, i convulsed and escaped my body for a second, god wouldnt let me through the gates of heaven, mum met stepdad, and the cycle began, manipulation and lies, from a so called 'good man', addiction manifested, he gambled our lives, poverty set in, awake through the coldest nights, no electric to spark the light bulb of change, mum in chains, siblings in pain, hard to maintain, with your life vain slain, timid and tame, sensitive man made, love provailed in my heart mate, the smoke never clogged the roots of the flower, hes a man now, and finaly hes stepped into his power.....

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Daniel Hooks

Wed 25th Mar 2009 09:10

great poem I have an answer in the form of a poem!
Call yourself alive
Every moment you are dying in your skin
Your not eternal
Though the fires of hell are infernal
And the path to hell is paved with good intentions
Regret is path easily met
To regret your entire life you might as well be a walking abortion!
Regret , regret nothing!

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Louise Fazackerley

Tue 24th Mar 2009 23:20

i enjoyed reading this- i too can definately relate. i particularly liked how succinct and rhythmic it is. i think you can really develop from here. i'll look forward to more stuff x

<Deleted User> (5899)

Tue 24th Mar 2009 18:27

Three things:
1. I can totally relate
2. This is beautifully written
3. It made me cry

A fantastic piece of writing.
x

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