Rain/Sun/Rain
I find, always, when looking out
of your window, I can see
what has come, has gone and what
is yet to be.
Rain, sun, and rain, perhaps merely
a seasonal thing;
a tempest of sorts before the tide
unclasps its cling
on a battered shoreline.
Beyond the sea,
behind the smeared glass
a new dawn tempts me
to rouse you from your sleep;
whispering sounds like fragrances
soft, gentle, delicate to touch;
to smooth over
crumpled bedsheets. And such
a day we’d make.
The storms of yesterday
had not long cleared;
time had passed and
our weary souls had only
affectionate rays, new to show.
Now you shift, beneath my song,
stir sideways, but
the clatter returns, soft now strong;
as you slowly wake.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 17th Mar 2014 10:51
You have a deft touch with diction, an ear for sound and the poetic sensitivity of seeing unusual relationships.
IMO, all good poets have a thesaurus at hand - you know - 'le mot juste'.
Line turns/breaks are also a major poetic skill and yours read well with both eye and voice .