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Morning Commute

My feet throb through my shoes
after a brisk walk to the station.
I keep my ears plugged with my beats
as I find my seat at the furtherest point.
Backs of heads, napes, and collars
mushroom and stare at me --
my polarised sunnies paint them bright;
Yet all I see is a tiny reflection of me.
Here in my world another day begins.
This cosmos is peopled isolation.

â—„ Yesteryearning

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Sun 23rd Mar 2014 15:06

your best to date Frederick.x

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 23rd Mar 2014 13:09

One of these days you're going to get run over.
A succinct description of so many young people these days. In a world of their own (by choice of course) almost in hiding. I wonder why?

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