the doomsday man
the doomsday man
surprisingly enough
each new day finds you
sandwiched here
between Burger king
and vacant lot -
thrice times woe man with
your brimstone smile.
slow dog-paddling
against the apathetic tide
that scours
these caves of Arndale.
your hand a flush
of trump card pamphlets,
useless
in this game
of patience;
black aces of repentance
neatly sidestepped
as the shoppers gamble
on CD’s and chocolates
like there is no tomorrow,
with secret hopes that “nigh”
is more than lifetimes
and “last few days
everything must go”
is not too literal.
you glower at the bored youths
and their
see you tomorrow
taunts,
before waddling home
to yet another last supper
of your bread and Buckfast life.
because each evening
is your Friday night
and your unexpected mornings
always Mondays.
no room in this life for predictions
of Michael
Fish
or pronouncements
of the Radio Times,
and nothing in for breakfast as you’re
opti-pessimistically
dreaming down the heavens
for the doubting Thomases.
and that one day
just one day
through the Saturday morning drizzle will come tremors
off the Richter scale
and a rain of fire
to flatten their umbrellas.
you will dance
and as they run for cover
punch the air
and shout -
“I fucking told you so!”
<Deleted User> (5646)
Sat 28th Mar 2009 10:10
Hi Anthony,
I liked the lines Steve mentions but also love the lines from "through the Saturday morning drizzle will come tremors," right to the ending.
I'm sure you've realized i'm a fan of your poetry and it took me aback a little at first read because it's so different from your recent postings. I like the style of this one too.
Yet another arrow from your bow :-)
Janet.x