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The Bitter Skald

 

Hacked from an alphabet,

words watch themselves being dragged

broken-legged

over war-torn vellum.

 

His prime now savaged

by the Sword of Orl Tyme,

the bitter skald depletes the seeds of Eden.

 

Withered fingers bruise upon a page

inked venomous

with echoes of a breath

hiss-thin                                                                                  

as a whisper in the windblown sky.

 

Pathetic panegyric;

his desiccated letters

hang flaccid,

all exhausted,

from a scribe grown dry.

                                                                                                             

Cut-throat kennings weep,

wintering to rust,    

as rune-roar muffles

to a pale hush-hush;

as rune-roar

muffles

to a

pale

 

hush-hu…

 

 

 

 

 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 7th Apr 2014 13:17

Top class - a best example of originality in thought and skill in language.

I remember doing 'Hymn of a Northern Clime' in 2011. Just mentioning the Nordic interest from back then.

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Laura Taylor

Sat 5th Apr 2014 10:44

Whhelll, who knew there were so many Nordic poems on here?! :)

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 3rd Apr 2014 19:10

yep - love the old norse stuff - posted this last year - sits close to the theme particularly Dominic's:

Yggdrasil

Odin’s Horse.
Noblest of trees.
where Gods assembled daily at their courts.
Nine worlds sat around you.
Your branches stretched towards the heavens –
home of wyrm, eagle and stags.
Your roots in three directions -
to spring and wells.
Creator of the valley dew.
at the onset of Ragnarok
you shivered and giants walked the earth.

A hart bites from above,
decaying on your sides,
whilst dragons chew from below.
Now loss of leaf
and ash dieback
destroy your ancient crown.
Necrotic spots
on stem and branch.
In summer.
born upon the breeze,
Chalara Fraxinea.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 3rd Apr 2014 10:05

Why thank you folks!

This didn't set out to be Norse poetry, have to say haha. I've had that first verse for ages now, trying to make it into different things and it stubbornly refused to fit into anything, until I thought of the word 'skald'. Looked it all up to see if I could genuinely use it, got a bit excited, and it started taking shape. I used several skaldic devices, themes and ideas, and even tinkered with the idea of actual form, but that seemed to be almost impossible, and I was happy with what I was doing so left it to one side.

Dom - you have educated me. I had no idea there was a 'thing' about Nordic stuff in general, so it's even more pleasing to me now! Ooo, and I love your poem there - jampacked full of the skaldic preference for alliteration. I love alliteration anyway so to have the freedom to write as much as I liked in one poem just added more joy to it :) I looked up the tree - really interesting!

Anyhoo, epic ramble over. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment chaps, appreciate it :)

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Dominic James

Thu 3rd Apr 2014 08:58

good Laura, that strikes a chord.

The Norse thing, with its mortal gods is a lot more interesting than that Greek heap. And so hot right now! Scots are re-engaging with Scandinavia, BP is at the British Museum singing the North Sea song. I bet a lot of the W-Loud crowd are hearing the call. It could be a good strand to run a VIking series here?

Just a thought: slightly meadish last night,
Dom.


The greasy pole?
That’s the tree of life,
Yggdrasil:
a one eyed man’s
white, giddy gallows

Nine nights swinging
in the wind
above 3 witches’ shallows
that is,
the well of destiny

chuck in your shiny
dirham, son,
spend a penny
on the fates.
Time’s short

your thread is cut with shears
but that's no leave
for tears, my dear
life’s good
so let’s be merry.

skol.




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Ged Thompson

Wed 2nd Apr 2014 20:42

Excellent use of words and language XXXXX

Hope you are well love

Keep up the good work

Ged X

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 2nd Apr 2014 14:23

this is as good as anything you've done Laura - right up my street - you can't beat a bit of norse poetry.
Beautiful use of language and image rich - gotta say you are moving apace on the technical side of poetry - no longer the ranter eh?

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