Chapter One
Once, upon, a time…
Is that how it went?
And did it follow that
they said
those allotted words, those
mined from the red hot
pits of thought,
shaped and resized;
tamed, wearily eyed?
And there, in a large,
gloomy house:
our hero, spending days
pacing halls too big for
the right adjectives to name.
They sit, press their
flickering hands together
and lean forward, frozen,
frowning, lost in ether.
And on occasion, a knocking
at a corner window, the sound
of falling rain; causing fraught minds
to re-trace, erase, return
with care, to the
cobwebbed shelves, again.
The following story is true…
It seemed only yesterday that…
Let me tell you about the time…
It was a dark, chill, winter night…
Let this waiting game begin;
discovering the depths of our hearts’ desires
in clear, bright, sharpened pen.
Lillian
Thu 10th Apr 2014 19:30
I truly loved this poem. It was very deep and the writing conjured up wonderful images. I loved your starting line. It set the mood of the poem even though the poem had barely begun. Also your break choices amplified the poem's mood, and imagery, and made it feel as if someone was speaking, not writing. I thought it was a very well written poem.