Sweaty streets condense
Into rain trodden pavements,
Cities drip through fall.
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Travis Brow
Wed 14th May 2014 07:19
I'm presuming 'fall' in the last line, refers to the season? I like the concision of this piece - it has the restraint and depth of a haiku. The contrast of the American 'fall' and the more English 'pavement' is indicative of the time you say you spend between New York and London. Short and sweet - nice.