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Wind and Tide

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Wind silk like knitting

Air to stitch the tide

Weave power with blades

You split the skies and opinions

Cries of derision wind and tide

Hatred the farm but pure in form

Just a matter of perspective a

Simple mind shift essence of love not rape

 

Ancient like rhythms past and future

White colossus a hum your whisper

A sentinel one legged supplanted

By ocean a legion your kin motionless

Emotionless yet moving

To shadow sun crack rainbows

Beautiful not a blot on my landscape

Far from a problem a solution 

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Jon

Fri 1st Aug 2014 10:24

hmm...wind turbines eh? lovely language mate,esp the last verse

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Richard

Tue 6th May 2014 14:54

Yea sure I genuinely find wind turbines a thing of beauty

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 6th May 2014 14:42


Like the way:
`You split the skies and opinions
Cries of derision wind and tide`

points the argument.

Also:
`White colossus a hum your whisper`

But are you wanting them out of your back yard and into our communal lake?

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