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LOVE....

All is calm, beautifull peace, until we push that button, and BANG!, shane goes flying across the room with coffee stains on chest, emily furious with scratch marks on breast, finger poked in lovers eye, fake cry to stop the war, a quick embrace then battle some more, ''you little bastard!'' shane on the floor, carpet burn on elbow, finger grabbed and bent back to its limit, emily screams and retaliates, wait a minuite! Get your finger away from my arse!, knickers in a wedgie, boxers ripped to shreds, crack!! Shanes brain rattled to bits, reach for the nips and twist!, pinned to the bed, just quit!, give me a kiss, not on your life! She hissed, dont take it to far, or me and you are not freinds! Knickers off, and pants down is how it always ends,

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Noetic-fret!

Sat 4th Apr 2009 12:12

Yosh, another impressive piece from your good self. You know 'love,' and 'life' in all its expressive ways. And I agree with pete, some good therapy there. Top one!

Pete Crompton

Sat 4th Apr 2009 11:43

Yosh,
I have been looking thru your poems
Great and powerful work, some hard edge rap styled stuff! You have some emotions there ready to explode, heres hopin you get the mic and hammer them out

'shanes brain rattled to bits' - like that bit too

will go have a read thru your other works, yes! powerful mate!

keep em goin..........
I hope that its good therapy, I recognise a lot of what you are saying here.....

Its like what I always say 'poetry is therapy'

cheers! and keep writing, ill go check your stuff out now

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