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WANDSWORTH WUFFIAN

Five years and nine months

Can you tell what it is yet?

It's not long enough

 

So whilst on 'A' Wing

Bend down to pick up your soap

Whilst in the shower

 

No 'Two Little Boys'

Just 'Jake the Peg's middle leg

Summary justice

 

A didgery-doo

Try your Kangaroo court sport

It's coming to you

 

Then why no remorse?

Banged up at portrait's pleasure

Let's hope for a horse

 

Land of striped sunshine

Only painted sunsets now

Enjoy your porridge

 

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Shirley-Anne Kennedy

Sat 13th Sep 2014 19:32

Agree with Lynn, clever.

Think he will have it easy. Certainly will compared to his victims.

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Lynn Dye

Fri 11th Jul 2014 08:56

Wow, this is really clever, Daniel. I always find haikus are too short unless you make a whole poem of them like this, which I have tried in the past also. I like what you say about that guy, without going into too much detail. Good one.

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Ged the Poet

Thu 10th Jul 2014 11:11

Haiku... You write the first and never know where the flow will go. I think I ended up with the songs from 'Junior Choice' meet the scenes from 'Midnight Express'!

Glad you got it and liked it Martin. Much appreciated.

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Martin Elder

Wed 9th Jul 2014 19:33

Very clever Daniel I like it. I can't imagine many people whistling his tunes now.

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