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God Knows I Try

Sometimes I get caught in my stuff,

Sometimes life gets in the way,

Sometimes I have little patience,

And that's ok.

 

Sometimes I really don't like me,

Sometimes I just want to cry,

Sometimes I make the same mistakes,

But God knows I try.

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Martin Elder

Thu 10th Jul 2014 20:47

Welcome Natalie
I like the fact that this is straight to the point. I also like unravelling and one night stand. Your use of words in both of these pieces is great. look forward to seeing more.

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Thu 10th Jul 2014 20:05

welcome to the club!-not sweet(obviously)
-but oh so succinctly neat!

xx

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Dominique Smith-Bryant

Thu 10th Jul 2014 17:21

Very good. It's honesty at its core without the frills and fanfare. Good piece!

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