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Desperate

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Desperate

 

My girl my nature

U made me u made me

A mad with sweetness of your heart

With an emptiness of my hand

Still waiting to hold u as a wish

 

My girl my nature

U had shown me u had shown me

What I am for this daffodil world

 

U are my girl my nature

U are my girl because you born for me

For my sovereign world

Where I travel like a dream world

Oh

My love my kindness

My fear my anxiety

My sorrow my happiness

Still awakes with a color of your face

And waits thousand times

With each dead pass of the nights

To see you one’s my girl

 

My girl my nature

U know my courage u know my power

From which I ruled a small world

If u remember me one’s

But I failed every time with no sense

When u passes by me one’s

 

Still I am failing every day

With this empty world

In this empty shell

With my pen as u ….my girl

With my pen as u ….my nature……

 

Hari Das

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haridas7499

Fri 11th Jul 2014 19:29

Thanx a lot Patricia & Stefan for reading my entry....all the best

<Deleted User> (6895)

Thu 10th Jul 2014 20:13

very much heartfelt lines.We loved it.

Thanks Hari Das.xx

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