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The Bound One

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Banished for an act not committed,

I am cursed by my fate,

A prophecy they said,

foretold by the Norns,

of me devouring Allfather.

 

Cursed I am,

by my blood.

Son of Chaos,

Mischief was expected,

I am not one for tricks,

Despite my wily father.

 

Cursed I am,

by my strength

and pride.

They used this against me,

told me it was a test of strength.

Leydin broke easily,

Dromi as well,

But Gleipnir aroused suspicion,

for it was a silken ribbon.

 

Reluctant I am,

of Gleipnir,

Forged with art,

and trickery,

deceiving is its strength.

 

A pledge I asked,

to test their courage.

Place your hand in my mouth,

as a pledge of goodwill.

If Gleipnir proves magical,

bound I shall be.

 

Brave is Tyr,

spineless they are,

Gleipnir was magical,

forged by the Dwarves,

Six impossible tasks,

forged it,

to bind an impossible thing,

fitting it is.

 

Angry am I,

Devoured Tyr's hand,

scorned and mocked,

they shall pay,

at Ragnarok!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FenrirFenris WolfGleipnirLokiNorse MythologyOdinRagnarokThorTrickeryTyr

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Lopt the Treacherous

Fri 11th Jul 2014 19:36

I greatly appreciate the feedback! Thank you very much! "Brave is Tyr" does sound a lot better.

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Dominic James

Fri 11th Jul 2014 09:24

Hi Lopt
I like this one best of those you have posted so far. "I am not one for tricks." That's right, a lot of this poem works in pace and character. I think "Brave is Tyr" would be a much better than "Brave Tyr is" which breaks the spell and confuses, then "Angry am I". And the picture is a distraction. But the message and the manner (inc. names of bonds: quite right too - and kennings coming in, better "all father" than Odin) pretty much spot on. Well done.
Dom.

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