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Perceptions (aka bored at a Health and Safety training)

How peculiar that I should
Feel your absence
As the presence
Of a strange, hollow,
Squeezing pain that's draining my blood.

How you've become from a stranger
The breath I take,
This honeyed ache
That never leaves me, 
Waking or dreaming, does linger.

How this warmth floods me in wild race
As I evoke
Your gentle stroke,
Kisses we exchange,
The times when we finally embrace.

 

 

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Cecilia Kovacs

Sun 10th Aug 2014 21:36

Thanks!

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sun 10th Aug 2014 21:18

very very clever and effective use of simple words-
-a dish of a poem....



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