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Evanescence

I would once again like to awaken with you be my side;

to have the pleasure of gazing into the beauty of your unfathomable soul through your deep dark eyes.

Through every step of it I could sense your warm presence hovering beside me;

smiling at me;

filling my being with everything that you had.

The yearning to be with you was all I could think of.

Love lost

◄ Stairway to paradise

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Andy N

Fri 15th Aug 2014 12:47

what a lovely, tender piece. really enjoyed reading this.

from a technical point of view, you may want to break some of your lines up as there are a bit long into two or more lines but its still a lovely piece.

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