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Northern Soul

Red brick ravines,

flagstone fences,

grey grit carpets,

smoking snow.

 

Extinct mill chimneys,

boarded windows,

paint tagged walls,

stolen moor.

 

Grass littered pavements,

starched railings,

mattress splattered entries,

living poor.

 

Hardened not beaten,

economy weakened,

cut and exposed,

northern soul.

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Shirley-Anne Kennedy

Sun 7th Sep 2014 16:12

Over the moon with your comment, Jeff :)

Thank you & would love too!

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 7th Sep 2014 07:48

Excellent Shirley Anne, you will have to come and perform this and some others at my Guitar n Verse night in Tyldesley, will go down well.

Thanks for your comment on 'The nearly was man' Jeff

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Shirley-Anne Kennedy

Thu 4th Sep 2014 12:04

Thanks Daniel.

I am some photos to go with it. Might get around to uploading them later to day :)

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Ged the Poet

Wed 3rd Sep 2014 20:47

"Hardened not beaten"
It still has a heart... it will always have a soul. ;)

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Shirley-Anne Kennedy

Tue 2nd Sep 2014 22:14

Only in parts, Lad. Only in parts ;)

Thank you for the comment Graham. Appreciated.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 2nd Sep 2014 21:42

Is it really this grim up north?
Very bleak, concise observations Shirley-Anne.
Good work.

Graham

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