untitled tube poem
i become a droplet of water
as i meander to and fro in this stream of human flesh
leaking into the subterraneous chasms that are the underground
each person is submerged with me; morphing into a bitter wave of water on the silver escalators
smashing against the next level of the intricate architecture
colourful scabs of advertising and neon promises of a 'way out' fill us all with false optimism
as we are each trapped together here, hidden from the sunlight
our sweat and stench fill the air, beads of sweat pound against the floor
only to evaporate and repeat as necessary
my fellow passengers pour from the doors, jumping ship to become a tidal wave inundating the platform
we emerge from the depths and flood the streets
squeaking into our mobile phones
<Deleted User>
Mon 13th Apr 2009 20:38
really like the style / language you use : ) great stuff and i felt i was there