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You made yourself famous

And then what did you do?

You grabbed a lead hammer with both hands

Smote the thing with all your might

Saw the pillar crumble to dust, then

Shrunk from the strobe searchlight

Danced with the lowlifes

That flanked the waste ponds

Made life

Took life

Then revelled in all your failures

Trailing ragged, bleeding

Across the frozen hinterland beyond

Your smashed mirror.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 9th Sep 2014 11:54

This is very good, intense in theme and presentation, with precise diction supporting strong images. I like the ancient idea that life itself is nothing but mirrors.

Did the fate of Robin Williams bring this work into focus?

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