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Poorly chosen
my words
hurled against the wall.
Stone-walled
by you.
Traveling from my mind
to my mouth,
hurtling out
unheeded, unchecked.
Hurting you,
hurting me.
Till you catch my lower lip
between your teeth
stroking, teasing, tasting
silencing me
more effectively than any words you could have ever thrown my way.
Preeti Sinha
Sun 14th Sep 2014 11:39
Thank you, Graham :) The last line seems out of kilter! I will edit it. Appreciate your feedback :)
Very effectively written. I don't personally like the extra long last line although its content is good. Well done Preeti.
Preeti Sinha
Sun 14th Sep 2014 10:34
Solar, it's so wonderful to see you again :)
Thanks Tommy!
...to see ya ...nice :)
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 14th Sep 2014 08:34
yummy!nice to see you back-to see you back-nice!x
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Preeti Sinha
Tue 16th Sep 2014 14:40
You crack me up, Philip :)
Yes, very active. Sexually ;)