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Nature

How kind the rain

to tiptoe

down

my window pane

As I lay down to

sleep.

How kind the breeze

to whisper

past

the autumn leaves

my eyes in slumber

deep.

How kind the sun

to cast a

ray

golden, tender

making way

for a glorious, glorious

sunny day.

◄ I am

Garbled thoughts ►

Comments

Preeti Sinha

Wed 17th Sep 2014 07:35

Thanks Martin and Tommy :)

So "kind" of you to read and comment!

It made my day.

Preeti

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 16th Sep 2014 22:47

Hi Preeti, '

''How kind the rain
to tiptoe
down
my window pane...''

''How kind the breeze
to whisper
past...'' this is sweet.

Tommy

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Martin Elder

Tue 16th Sep 2014 22:45

Hi Preeti

I like this poem. the way each verse starts with 'How kind' , particularly how kind the rain.

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