Story Time
The sun had set at its usual hour
bringing excitement for a new found desire
of a book of mischeif or maybe magical power
we ran to the couch with an eager thrill
and daddy read as we listened still
as we hung to every suprising and unexpected word with will
Witches and forests that were frozen
to adventerous journeys unchosen
each word that was read
had danced in our head
and painted a place
that held no time or space
still to this day when the the sun sets I reminisce and will never forget
all his magical heroes and wonderous woodlands that continue their immortal duet
Graham Sherwood
Mon 13th Oct 2014 12:36
This is a really nice, charming piece. I think it could be improved if the rhythm of each line was in better balance and trilled more evenly.
well done,
Graham