Laid Bare
Laid Bare
I'm looking across the room,
Feeling very small indeed,
Blades rock a world of insults,
Positioned delicately to a bleed.
Open passion invites catastrophe,
A whine of desperate truths,
A possessed of all 'that' paradox,
From a heart without a sleeve.
Michael J Waite Friday 17th April 2009 2256hrs.
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Mon 20th Apr 2009 09:50
Like this , just smal thing in V2:
A possessed of all 'that' paradox, is the only line I have problems with . 'A' is confusing and don't need to put 'that ' in apostrophes s it disturbs the flow.