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Woven Threads of Life

 
 
 
We wake beneath the spangled stars,
You on Jupiter, Me on Mars,
Linked by just a silken thread,
Who knows which path of life we'll tread,

Misty memories of times long past,
Like grains of sand in an hour glass,
Scars abound from lessons learned,
Pain of life or love that's spurned,

We wake beneath the spangled stars,
You on Jupiter, Me on Mars,
Now raise a glass to all bar none,
Friends reunited under one Sun.
 
 
Copyright ©2009 Paul Letch Alias: Murky Pool Publishing Ltd

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Paul Letch

Fri 15th Jul 2011 23:22

Its a rather lean time for magical word forms for me :) which cannot be helped just yet. I need someone to bounce off of, as I feed on creativity. Sadly there is little around me to inspire such great works. I lurk among the pages of this site searching for, craving for brilliance, till now and then it spears me like chard of glass. I like your words and thank you for showing them.

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Francine

Fri 15th Jul 2011 21:36

I love the sentiments in this. For me, it reads as life and afterlife.

Thank you for your comments on 'Walking around somewhere' - I enjoyed the process of writing it.

You haven't posted anything in quite a while!
Funny how people come and go on here...

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 20th Apr 2009 21:38

Hi Paul,
i really like this litttle poem.
It makes me smile. I do love writings which include the planets though. I've done a few myself but haven't posted any for a while.

Janet.x

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