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Waiting for Nancy (VII)

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Top heavy in Irish Stew
From an amazing gig
The night before
My arrival to our 7th adventure
Was delayed with Cathy’s younger cat
Deciding it didn’t like Extreme Metal
And ran into the other
Resulting in World War 3
Round the back of the TV, 

And me getting to the bus stop
Minus my bus pass
And heading back into the flat
To walk into Round 2
With both of the Cats
Spitting at each other
Like short changed bullets
In the middle of the bath, 

Dis-interested bus drivers
Who stopped twice
For a cigarette break
And a call with a woman
That didn’t sound
Like his wife,

Closed banks
Which were eating people’s cards
Like toast
And two people I knew
But didn’t know
Had set up a poetry writing group
And nearly joined in
If I hadn’t been going
Somewhere else,

Cracked with a final argument
Between rivalling football fans
Making me glad
I gave up chasing the flag
Years ago
And instead followed the muse.

 

(7th in a series)

◄ Waiting for Nancy (VI)

Waiting for Nancy (VIII) ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 30th Oct 2014 13:07

A very,very,worthwhile read.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 27th Oct 2014 10:22

Excellent - some beautiful wordplay in this, although I wonder why the capitalising of each new line. The story itself is intriguing and I love the detail about the cat wars :)

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 26th Oct 2014 10:24

Gray, I've just read the (so far) septology (I don't think that's a real word) of Waiting for Nancy.

These have a great tease effect of always wanting to know more. Especially liked No7.

I think you might be onto something

Well done, Graham

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