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THIS AINT A MANS WORLD..Dedicated to the strong women who influenced my life.

I walked through my area the other day, and not one man came my way, i realised there aint a man in one of these fucking homes, just mothers battling it out on their own, kids losing their right to a masculine influence, hence forth, a generation of violence, as they battle for dominance, where the fuck are all the fathers!!?, in the pub or in the bookies, on their lazy arses!, women are trapped, their lives already mapped, blocked when it comes to choosing a career path, this aint no mans world, as theres no real men left, Either in jail or dead, women breaking their backs, for scraps, no hunter gatherer, he's addicted to smak, junkie twat, dont plant seeds and bail out, when they sprout, this aint no mans world.... There aint no real men about...

◄ I WILL MARCH!!

UNTITLED...part 8 ►

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clarissa mckone

Wed 22nd Apr 2009 05:04

Dear Yosh, I really understand your poem. Been there done that.I wont go into detail, but all 3 of mine had the same father, and he does not talk to them, call them on birthdays, send a card at christmas, he has done nothiing, and Im to poor to take him to court over and over and force him into being a man and father.But Im a strong female, and try to make up for the lack.I dont know. but good poem. females should be loved and cared for, and thats seems to have gone away.Chrildren need a man around to be some kinda father ... the world is all a mess, God will help at some point.xx good poem clarissa

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Francine

Tue 21st Apr 2009 19:14

This perspective is so true for many...
I deal with kids from broken homes everyday and I understand this in many ways...
It is an unfortunate fact that women are still undermined in many ways... still to this day.

Shane, your writing makes people think... and that's awesome : )

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