My Man
I am looking for a man
who smokes, drinks and thinks
he is the best.
I’d like to share with him
the same interests.
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Comments
Hello Laura,
Nice to see you posting on here. You should add an audio. I'm sure the accent would add a new dimension of sensuality.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Thu 6th Nov 2014 16:54
now this is what I call....great!
well done,Larisa!x
<Deleted User> (6895)
Thu 6th Nov 2014 10:37
oh yes! very very clever!lets have more like this Larisa.Soooo nice to have you back.xx
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Alem Hailu G/Kristos
Sun 9th Nov 2014 06:27
It showcases how it is possible to use 'defamilarization' a technique the Russian formalist critics uphold in rendering a poem power. Making a paradigm shift you wished for something almost no lady wishes for;a man who smokes and drinks.
It shows it is possible to apply this technique in content as well as in style.