Setting

its a beautiful thing watching the sunrise and sun set,

but i will forever be a moon child;

most nights i look out my window. lights off, immersed in the fineline music of darkness.

& in my darknest of hours the only light shedded was from the mood;

"i am here...for you.."

many faces i have shown

"i too have many faces.."

when i feel like im surrounded by the unnecessary..

"we can share my stars.."

when i want to watch the sun?

"i can turn red.." 

when i want to shout and punch at the sky

"ill let you howl at the moon..

i am here.."

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 21st Nov 2014 17:08

This is very interesting - arresting.

Check your line 'and in my darkest hours the only light shed was from the moon'. I think this is what you wanted. I may be wrong, but have a look, just in case.

'Cynthia'means 'goddess of the moon', so I can relate to these feelings.

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Andy N

Thu 20th Nov 2014 10:34

like the use of dialogue in italics here, gives it a different feel to what i expected originally. good stuff.

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