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Onion rings

Now I have a thing for onion rings

the roundness and batter

Oh my heart sings

 

reminds me of polos

but softer and bigger

glad they are not minty.

I hear you snigger

 

But with my rings and a mayo dip

I close my eyes

Off I go on my trip

 

To the land of onion rings

floating though the loops

 

swimming through the rings

Marching with onion ring troops

 

Oh I love the oniony rings

twelve...? 

stick with six

Dont go crazy, 

Keep in check

Oh I love

my onion ring

fix

 

 

◄ Blackball

Just another day ►

Comments

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Alex mills

Mon 8th Dec 2014 23:32

haha, thank you for reading! :))

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jack purvis

Sun 30th Nov 2014 14:00

Enjoyed. Thankyou

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