Red Kites
Plague birds, exquisite and focused,
who scavenged Shakepeare’s unspeakable
streets, they have drifted back
from the borderlands of extinction
on tense, splayed wings.
Circling soundlessly
in the rinsed clarity of spring light
they have staked their claim
to limitless acres above
the Chilterns’ wooded heights.
And was it months, or even a year,
my own dreams of flying
took possession of sleep,
making something of nothing
in gaps between the days?
– My free falls and soaring
seeming purposeless, inspired,
until, ceasing, they left me earthbound,
trying to keep my eyes
on this twisting road.
First published in The North 2014.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 25th Nov 2014 16:01
David, why do you need the 'they' in the first stanza Or the dash to introduce Stanza 4? The last verse is hard to follow -but I finally figured it out, I think. A comma after 'soaring' would really help, and perhaps one less 'ing' word if you could restructure something.