Sweeter Than Any Wine
No, I'm not doing a thing tonight
She uttered to her red dress
Carelessly caressing the wind
The man in the pinstripe twisted
Her brown curl with a sly smirk
Then walking down the hill glanced one last time
At the 'v' fold of her skirt
And those chubby knees scarred
By worn nylons
After the dusk had mellowed to black
Twice over and brought up a new morn
The young woman lay upon the same checkered quilt
Innocently crushing the green twigs and wondering
If her virginity would ever wander back
Katie
Tue 16th Dec 2014 17:38
I agree with both of your suggestions, thank you! I should read my poems aloud more often.