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Stallion

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Mares grazed in quiet contentment,

Their foals were close beside.

They suckled and they frolicked,

While the mothers watched with pride.

 

This scene of peace and beauty,

Was shattered with a din.

When horse box clattered to the site,

And passion galloped in.

 

A mighty beast stood proud and tall,

His male pride proclaimed.

A whinny rent the tranquil air.

Head thrown back, nostrils flamed.

 

He drew the equine, female scent,

And stamped in pow'rful lust.

With thundering hooves he circled round,

To mate with mighty thrust.

 

At first approach there is rebuff.

This mother will not play.

Her eyes are for her tiny child.

She kicks him hard away.

 

Chest and pride severely bruised,

The mighty beast drew back.

But selfish genes were greater force,

Than ribs by brood mares cracked.

 

Regaining breath and snorting loud,

He charged to sate his need.

Rounding on a second mare,

He lunged to plant his seed.

 

But fierce response came faster still,

Than it had done before.

Fearsome hooves lashed out behind,

And cut a wound so sore.

 

Limping now, and marked by shoes,

The stallion blundered through.

Each move toward reluctant mare,

Was met with cruching shoe.

 

The mothers took offensive then.

Their feelings could be read.

They closed in kicking frenzy,

And ill fated stud fell dead.

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clarissa mckone

Tue 6th Nov 2007 00:59

na your no prat and its not your fault that I havent a clue about tech terms on poetry.I would love to know what it is, if you ever have the time to explain. thanks

Malcolm Saunders

Mon 5th Nov 2007 09:08

Sorry. Last verse but one. I will try to speak English in future and avoid being a prat.

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clarissa mckone

Mon 5th Nov 2007 03:10

well malcolm, thanks for the cool story. I would have never noticed it, not sure what a penultimate stanza is.thanks

Malcolm Saunders

Sun 4th Nov 2007 11:17

Thanks very much Clarissa.This is an account of an actual event. Travellers put their horses into a field next to a house I used to live in. They were there for some time and we enjoyed their presence. When the stallion was delivered one day everything changed. and it was pretty much as I describe in the poem.

Sorry I have noticed a typo. It should say 'crunching' in the last line of the penultimate stanza.

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clarissa mckone

Sat 3rd Nov 2007 15:24

wow, its really very good. the ending took me by surprise. thanks

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