Held on to the start
forgot that time had past
the few to many goodbyes inbetween
and didn't realise that what we had was lost
tried re-tracing my steps
must have tripped over the feelings i use to get
shouldve let go
when you said you didn't know
I guess I just hoped that you could remember what i wouldn't let go of.
good to see you back, Emmy... enjoyed this as i have your other pieces, but the changes between capitals and none capital words at the start of each line did confuse me a little but the last line ties it together..
good stuff. keep it up andy
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Emma
Mon 5th Jan 2015 23:30
Hi Andy I have no idea what's going on with the capital letters I'll have to fix it up, glade you enjoyed this poem thanks for your feed back it's always appreciated :)