Liberation
Liberation
Everything controversial, wins upon it's ethics,
though nothing worth its effort is ever easy in its name,
Liberating lands of foe is more than politics,
it's a backward glance at darkest hours, where
regimes cripple civil rights.
Kabul under siege,
Human beings tied to coffins
fight amongst themselves to leave,
and kidnappings of futures
set concrete to its grief,
believe the western hemisphere,
the road to cemeteries in Kandahar
is brief.
A Troopers life,- a sacrifice,
A reason run by sordid deaths;
A fly by of a fight against a
Taliban with rape
upon its wives, and lives of
children, hungered, kept
dark of scribes slip
silently their knives,
deep inside the Burkha,
a garment like tradition
of religious faith,
insulted, stained -
matted by a
hate.
A corpse if you will?
Bring them back and sit
them still, but be complicit
on a darkened hour and aid
a gawky kill! Spill sublime
ferocity and forget a fellow
nation, a nation plagued by
serpents skill for a womb
they disrespect.
The sister, mother, daughter you
adore, be nothing more than whores,
if sitting there you state within the
comfort of your chair; 'bring em back,
and let Afghanistan rot itself on
poppy fields and crack.'
Michael J Waite 1st May 2009 2222hrs.
Chris Dawson
Mon 4th May 2009 09:56
Not usually a great fan of special effects, but it sort of works on this one - sort of like those diembodied, tannoy voices you can imagine coming from armoured vehicles warning you to stay in your home, or some such. The only thing with special effects, I think you have to be a little more precise with your diction to counteract the distorting effect, and I'm not sure your recording levels are set absolutely right for you.
On a performance note - beware starting the first 'note' of your sentence higher and letting your voice trail away to the end of the sentence - we all do it, but it does tend to lose words like that and give a slightly 'worthy' tone to your performance - better to let the words speak for themselves, particularly with such an emotive piece as this.
Cx