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SAD SYMPHONY

I could write beautifull scriptures, but life contradicts these, peaceful pictures, i envision, through the television, i see the world on a mission, its like, armageadon in a 3d prism, these are dark days, hard ways we're raised on, raised in a maze,yes im phased, but head strong, do we care though?, like its all about the money man, cash rules everything around me, its funny man, its all fashion,lifestyle and muscle, its all designed,to leave us blind to the real struggle, kids being raised to be evil, its eden the sequal, like when adam took the apple from eve, best beleive, the devils on the path to infamy, like everyday is just another sad symphony...

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Francine

Tue 12th May 2009 21:52

This says so much and rhymes so well too... very powerful Shane...

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Noetic-fret!

Tue 12th May 2009 20:54

Brilliant yoshman, you can tell by the sombre undertone that this is a more thoughtful piece. And to be honest it is for its honesty and attitude, a lot more louder than some of your previous material. There is, as always, truth here that not many have the balls to state 'out loud', Nice one for having the balls. I really like this one from you.
Mike
be well

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clarissa mckone

Wed 6th May 2009 00:50

nice one Yosh!Its all about money and the banks.best watch out, or you may offend fascist and be censord.

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Daniel Hooks

Tue 5th May 2009 19:08

excellent poem Yosh!!!

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