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The palm of your hand

Out of nothing but instinct, And luck,

it leaves you in the palm of my hand.

Who need we'd be in like this, i mean fuck,

im in the palm of your hand.

Well our romance is a crime, and our affair is horribly right.

But im hand and hand with you already,

So lets just take our time, make it a hell of a night,

We can make it like counting sand,, just in the palm of your hand.. c;

 

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Ged Thompson

Sat 31st Jan 2015 01:19

I like this

think there's a typo on the 3rd line

Knew/ need?

Nice write though, sorry if I'm wrong about typo

Ged

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