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Death of a gang member

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His crying out

only adds more ugliness

to the scene

and becomes

a self made requiem.

 

With chaos

in his dying eyes

and bullshit heroism gone

he is discovering

how pathetic it was

to think false bravado alone

provided invincibility.

 

There was never going to be

a medal for your savagery to others.

This is your inevitable prize

the blade you thought

would never find your flesh.

The 'No Fear' emblazoned t-shirt

now soaking in your OWN blood.

 

While bystanding

I look down

with pity.

But it will be

for the ghosts of your victims

those who will be waiting

to greet you

on the other side

with vengeful cheers.

________________________________________________

 

 

© Stef Wilde 2015

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 14th Feb 2015 15:48

It is indeed sad when such events happen,especially for the families,not only of the victims,but also those of the perpetrators of violence.If Phil had his way and possessed the same Magnum (not the crunchy lolly,but the gun,one hastens to add)that Dirty Harry(not of the O'Neill surname!)has,the streets and A&E's would be very quickly emptied-bigtime!You don't possess such a weapon do you Phil?-please say no!

xx

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 9th Feb 2015 12:24

its the knock-on effect that something like this has on the rest of the innocent families of the deceased eh guys?

Taking it as just being a poem,it is very well written.Later folks.x

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Jackie Phillips

Sun 8th Feb 2015 12:12

What a sad poem, but then it is a painful subject you have covered.

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