Crucifix (2/10/2015)
daisy-cutters; storm gutters
bring us yer trash, the leftovers of leisure
masters of cruel improvisation
we'll trade your pain for our pleasure.
dog-killers; roughneck bashers
burying yer secrets in the quietus of night
stoking ash and fingernail coffins
a tarnished future burns bronze, just as bright.
sore lovers; strong haters
basting yer alligator boots
eyeglaze bristled by store-bought lashes
ne'r shone brighter in a back alley truce.
we're all whores here.
we're all bastards there.
but none does what we do betterĀ
just a skin under anywhere.
here lies us:
standing where prayers come to fail.
Jackie Phillips
Thu 12th Feb 2015 12:17
So deep and moving, I very much enjoyed the rich descriptive language. I painted the picture brilliantly and yet wasn't to wordy. I am afraid I tend to be a little too wordy with my own poetry but will be aiming to use this poem as an example when I write my next piece. Thanks for sharing