I’m all for feedback communication

focussed on the punctuation, iteration,

connotation and even the alliteration.

But what about the contemplation?

Did you feel just one sensation?

Appreciate its mere creation?

You know it took consideration

and your simple factual concentration

could lead me to feel some frustration;

a melancholy motivation

trapped in comma constipation.

This isn’t an obliteration

but please use some consideration.